The Source Poem by Linda Ori

The Source

Rating: 3.3


Stardust exploding in infinite sparks
Rivers of gold swirl in circular form
Blackness the drape for celestial art
Wonder and magic infinity's storm;

Darkness and light in continuous flow
Dazzling reflection of diamond dust star
Spiraling orbs in a nebulous glow
Radiant energy waves from afar;

Thoughts of all mortals here on this plane
Highly transcendent they mingle as one
There in the vastness of cosmic domain
Reality's truth is begun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 21 January 2007

'Blackness the drape for celestial art' is magic of the poetic kind! A terrific melding of cosmological understanding and poetic talent from the big bang of your creation to the infinite effectiveness of the final composition. I'm wowed. xx

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Danny Reynolds 11 January 2007

Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! This is just fantastic, Linda. From inception to eternity, with a little bringing down to earth. Loved it. Danny

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Raghavan Warrier 09 January 2007

The last stanza is truly remarkable. A diificult idea to convey; but beautifully done.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 January 2007

A sojourn of celestial energies...And the decorum employed here, is sumo-electric Grandeur imagery takes this poem; WHERE NO MAN HAS GONE BEFORE'! Solid quilling Linda...... fRANK

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