The Sleep Walkers Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Sleep Walkers

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A sleep walker on the street,
He is wearing a thick jacket,
Something in his hands,
Is it a cell phone?
No, a device, a remote control,
Where is he going?
To the paradise,
To meet fairies,
In a garden of flowers,
And delicious fruits,
To drink the flavored milk,
From the canals,
A teen aged boy,
Presses the button
of the device,
His sleep is over,
He finds himself in the painful fire,
He regrets his sleep,
But is helpless now!

A mother is waiting
for his son,
Just two days ago,
A stranger came,
Gave her some money,
Sent by his son,
She is waiting for
the next remittance.

Another stranger,
Not with money,
With news that his son,
A suicide bomber,
Killed women and children,
And himself too,
All male members
of the family,
Were arrested for,
Further investigations,
The second installment,
For the ailing mother!

His old husband,
Who took his son,
To the place of cruelty,
Knew everything,
Was found guilty,
And sentenced,
With rigorous imprisonment,
Of several years,
The third installment,
For the ailing mother!

His sister was engaged,
To a cousin when she was a kid,
The engagement has been broken,
And the girl engaged to him,
When came to his mother,
She burst in tears,
Blood brought tears,
Here and there,
Yes, everywhere,
The fourth installment,
For the ailing mother!

Many more to come,
From the earth,
And,
From the skies!

How nice were the days,
When kids of the family,
Organized a sleepover,
It was a moonlit night,
In the large tall trees,
Hide and seek,
The street night cricket,
Marriage of the dolls,
Delicious foods,
Pretty folk songs,
Rubab mandolin of the east,
Smell of gun powder,
Polluted the water,
Polluted the air,
All beauty was lost!

Many more to lose,
In the black holes,
of terrorism?
Or the proxy wars!

Friday, January 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: war
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajesh Thankappan 30 January 2015

You have wonderfully brought out as to how terrorism inflict pain and loss in different ways all at the same time. I loved each and every line of the poem and especially these, to quote, Smell of gun powder, Polluted the water, Polluted the air, All beauty was lost! Thank you for sharing this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 January 2015

A mother is waiting for his son, Just two days ago, Really wonderful composition shared on. Definitely pleasing.

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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

Many more to lose, In the black holes, of terrorism? Or the proxy wars! ..........nice plot....great work

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 February 2015

A thoughtful write on current scenario. You have presented very beautiful poem on terrorism, pain and sufferings of people. Loved reading it.

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Valsa George 01 February 2015

By vested interests and religious and political fanatics, how many youngsters are trapped to become suicide bombers. How many mothers lose their sons! The story of the young man walking to the mouth of danger is so poignantly described.... Poverty prompts many to take up such drastic steps! To wipe out terrorism from the face of the Earth should be the self undertaken task of all governments! A powerful write!

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Khalid Saifullah 30 January 2015

A poem with a very strong message......................10

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Bisma Mirza 30 January 2015

Its an Outstanding one definitely..... Superb! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10...

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