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The Sinking Boat - Poem by inas essa

The sun had closed the winter day
While the boat was shaking at the sight of nowhere,
Waves were so high, made everything shudder,
A burning ray of Fear pierced her heart; pushing life away,
Its likeness is not found in sea or air.

She grabbed the gunwale of the boat so close
With her trembling heart, both, in one hand,
Looked here and there; searching for a creature of any kind
To share her wounded feelings,
She was met with closed eyes of all around.

Before her eyes, life was near a close
Flashes of ruined life crossed her head,
Like the gray face of a winter cloud
That shadowed her mind and soul, both,
She felt the freezing of her heart's blood.

In a moment of death, she was offered a chance to live;
Colors of distant island flashed to her withered eyes
Lighted beneath the moon's pale beams,
She dreamed of wings to fly, in another chance did believe,
Found nothing, but her shivering feeble arms.

She closed her eyes, so tight, opened her heart to cry,
Felt warmth within a tender embrace,
Wrapped her within his wings,
Like a passing thought, she fled away
From the island, she glanced the boat sinking in unknown depths.

Comments about The Sinking Boat by inas essa

  • Rookie - 19 Points Ajay Seshadri (3/14/2014 10:46:00 AM)

    I really liked the way you have strung images in your poem. I can see how naturally the verse flows; it is indeed a beautiful expression. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 21 Points Gary Kedron (12/18/2013 2:53:00 AM)

    Inas essa.... you had invited me to read your poetry,
    the sinking boat, your message got lost in the shuffle
    everything arrives precisely as it must.... what a beautiful story told
    thank you for your concern... heartfelt....Peace (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,016 Points Is It Poetry (11/20/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    The path life has she knows.
    One leads above the other below.
    Thoughts of love one wears it shows.
    Knowing the heart left to be.....iip (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Thomas Duncky (10/16/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    No much words can redefine what a lot of commentators have already penned here. This was a classic one. I loved every bit of it. Let there be hope even in times of peril when fear tries to send us home before the gods choose to end our lives! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 885 Points Kaila George (10/3/2013 4:38:00 PM)

    This is tragic but the flow of words and how you used them are so wonderful and elegant thank you for inviting me to read this beautiful write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/2/2013 5:01:00 AM)

    she glanced the boat sinking in unknown depths./
    'tis a lovely way of expressing the actuality of life......
    top markss for you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Yvette Marina Nario (10/1/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    I like the way you create an internal imagery which touches the senses creating chills from one's neck all the way to one's spine. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,015 Points Soulful Heart (10/1/2013 1:35:00 AM)

    lovely way to express the paradox of life...............moments of living felt at darkest moments of despair or end.............great (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Alex Drax (9/29/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    To share her wounded feelings,
    She was met with closed eyes of all around.....

    Indeed well rounded and expressed....

    Flashes of ruined life crossed her head.... very good..

    In a moment of death, she was offered a chance to live; .... life and death.. two sides of the same coin.. well versed..

    She closed her eyes, so tight, opened her heart to cry, .... the moment we give up hope is when we find our salvation...

    Great poem indeed... a reflection of life and its mysteries... summed up into one word.. Struggle.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (9/29/2013 7:11:00 AM)

    This is a lovely piece of poetry is this a reflection of one's self or observation? keep up the great work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 46,883 Points Edward Kofi Louis (9/29/2013 2:50:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work; and, i know it reflects part of your life in Egypt. Thanks for sharing this Poem with us.

    E.K.L. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 286 Points Seinu Abdulgafar (9/28/2013 2:11:00 PM)

    very nice poem, Inas. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,837 Points S.D. TIWARI (9/28/2013 4:08:00 AM)

    Very touching. Nicely written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,536 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (9/28/2013 2:16:00 AM)

    Nice piece. Try The Enchanted Sea when you have a spare minute. I'd forgotten I'd written it until I read your work.
    thanks... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 693 Points Ernestine Northover (9/27/2013 4:41:00 PM)

    A wonderful storyline captured with thoughtfulness and clarity, Gently woven. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kerri Byrnes (9/27/2013 4:21:00 PM)

    Very touching, and very powerful imagery (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Violet Winters (9/27/2013 9:37:00 AM)

    I was randomly solicited by this author to read this particular poem, gave an honest review, and author deleted my comment as I'm sure she will delete this one! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (9/26/2013 11:24:00 AM)

    Very emotional piece with excellent imagery and suspense., (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (9/25/2013 11:10:00 PM)

    Excellent. Very beautifully penned and very touching poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing with me. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (9/25/2013 10:16:00 PM)

    A great write! I like it. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 11, 2013

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