The Singer Poem by Asif Andalib

The second line has more than 7 syllables vioalting the haiku pattern-the 1st and 3rd line is technically ok....haiku modern days are 5-7-5 format.You can transfer the ideas to the Arabic style where you can express more like French romance.Its called a Metre in Oxford English.Its expression format is musical rather.You can google it.Nevertheless nice trying hand in haiku or the japanese hokkus which usually is of a much shorter syllable of matching events as a coherent happening.Thanks

Dear Asif, it's nice to go through your poetry, 'The Singer' a 5-7-5 haiku entry. Really a singer 'can do marvel' To the audience with pleasure and gravel