The Setting Sun Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

The Setting Sun

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''The silent setting of the sun
carries with it the joy of our day
for in this late afternoon
as we lay on the grass
and holding you by the hand
we talked of so many things
while watching the clouds as it pass
seeing your beautiful crystal eyes
that rhymes to the colors of the sky
and feeling your lovely smile
that spread love so many miles
and the roses in the garden
make this place so serene
the leaves that fell nearby
provided a silent symphony
to the birds singing as they fly
turning our heartbeats into melody.'

Saturday, November 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Villamil 20 November 2016

This poem is so full of emotions that only you can express. As you share your true feelings with your writing, expressing it so tenderly

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Bharati Nayak 19 November 2016

Tender feelings so nicely expressed.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 19 November 2016

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak for a very nice comments.

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