The Second Madrigal Poem by Anna Swirszczynska

The Second Madrigal

Rating: 3.4


A night of love
exquisite as a
concert from old Venice
played on exquisite instruments.
Healthy as a
buttock of a little angel.
Wise as an
anthill.
Garish as air
blown into a trumpet.
Abundant as the reign
of a royal Negro couple
seated on two thrones
cast in gold.

A night of love with you,
a big baroque battle
and two victories.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 11 February 2017

Healthy as a buttock of a little angel................................................... Fantastic. Marvelous with its intense passion. Non-entity getting its stimulating manliness. The credit of a poet to personify such abstract which only resides within human brain. Great by its degree of representing boldness.

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Brian Jani 05 May 2014

enjoyed this poem, fantastic! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 February 2017

A night of love with you. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tom Allport 11 February 2017

a lovely poem of the mutual feelings felt.

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Indira Renganathan 11 February 2017

Longing for love....highly descriptive with similes.... poetically beautiful- 10++++

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Paresh Chakra 14 December 2018

I am really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing this poem

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 February 2017

Wonderful, superb naughtiness admissible in love expressed in an exquisite manner. Congrats on modern poem of the day and thanks for sharing it here.

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Terry Craddock 11 February 2017

'A night of love with you, a big baroque battle and two victories.' The poem begins as the declaration 'A night of love/ exquisite as' then continues with unique wonderful metaphors, the wonderful image of a 'concert from old Venice/ played on exquisite instruments', extends into the juxaposition of fresh unexpected contrasts, yet the last stanza proclaims the vastness of this love victory, as big as 'a big baroque battle' yet unlike battles to the death, this battle of love is a victory for both sides, both lovers. Wonderful images.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 February 2017

Interesting to read the words written here.....

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 11 February 2017

Wow! What a wonderful poetic craftsmanship she has expressed. Truly a poem of passion. Thanks for sharing. x

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