The Sea-Fever. Poem by Fay Slimm

The Sea-Fever.

Rating: 5.0


From liquid glass to boiling foam, moody Sea
Can gentle be, or scream out her commands
With restless need for exclusivity
She drowns attempts to flee her reprimands.
Savage mistress she.

Skirting coastline, Jezabel in uniform
Will smile teasingly, beguile us, winning
Love with fickle heart, until she strips, storms
Forth naked, then fury-dancing begins.
Savage performer she.

Watch fever unchained, behold hell regaining
Tempestuous wilful hold, - - but calm reveals
Her face again. Love of sea, lifelong, remains
Alluring as a mermaid's kiss, - - unyielding
Savage sweetheart she.

Go to her then, stay awhile you coastal child.
Sea fever is addictive more than gold,
But beware, leaving her will drive you wild.
Her siren call imprisons with strong hold.
Savage jailor she.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 05 August 2009

Nice work Sea fever was always my favourite poem as a child and you capture it's allure in this fine write xx

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Bob Blackwell 19 August 2009

I nearly fell into the water, but some kind person stopped just in time, I was so enthusied by the realness of your poem. Bob 10

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Tom Balch 13 August 2009

A wonderful piece Fay, glad I found this one, thank you, regards Tom 10+

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Gayle Anne Goff 06 August 2009

HELLO FAY IT'S 1; 15 AM AND I JUST READ YOUR POEM GOOSE BUMPS BEFORE BED LOVE IT LOVE IT! ! ! BUT YOU KNEW I WOULD. ''HER LOVE OF SEA LIFE LONG REMAINS ALLURING A MUMAIDS KISS WOW! ! SEA FEVER IS ADDITIVE WORSE THAN GOLD. TRUE SEA FEVER IS WORSE THAN DRUGS EVEN. I NEVER HAVE DONE DRUGS. BUT AS YOU KNOW I HAVE THAT SEA FEAVER BAD! ! ! ! ! . LOVE THIS POEM MY FRIEND.LOL

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Shashendra Amalshan 05 August 2009

Hello Fay, ! ! ! your page is filled with new ones.. So I randomly picked this one, I' m very glad I did.. This is beautiful indeed Fay... You are born with poetry in heart indeed... This is in a way a narrative one isn't it? .. I specially like such ones.. 'But beware, leaving her will drive you wild. Her siren call imprisons with strong hold. Savage jailor she. ' I love these expressions.. very nice to read, very poetic, and beautiful flowery language... with love shan

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Herbert Nehrlich2 05 August 2009

Of course I like this and I wonder what happened that we both posted sea poems at about the same time. Mine is Drink Seawater? Hxx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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