The Sands Of Time Poem by JoAnn McGrath

The Sands Of Time

Rating: 5.0


The pedals to the metal
Moving film has reached it's credits
The grains of sand are campaigning
to the hourglasses merits

The metronome screams
I can't keep up the pace!
The turtle shouldn't even bother
running in the race

Where has it all gone?
The tidal wave resounds
Silent in the waiting
Endless meadows underground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 07 April 2007

JoJo, lovely imagery here. Lovely poem. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Marci Made 31 March 2007

Just beautiful, nice use of metaphors, ....thanks for this one jojo......mm.xo

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