The Same Race............................ Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

'The Same Race' it sounds like a ralley call for all humans, Or rather, For all poets to create something that is different, and yet the same. a message that has no color or creed. Only requirement is that emotions are exchanged

Good use of rhyme, flows like a stream of poetic vision...nice keep'm coming

the flow is finely done and full of rhymes and poetic verses...

you know how to use your sweet words.. yes we all in a race.. time will not wait us.. perfect thoughts dear tamara, , 10+++ hazem al..

The same race........... Come under God's grace With will and thougts you fill he mind, And pray to the God, merciful and kind............Good Write.........

eaquisite musical and great flow among the few very nice poems iv done here cngrats and thanxs... a lot has been said alredy and i agree...its a very verynnice poem God bless u cheers and ten

let me say once again..I read this poem and liked much..well done friend... for that much sweet piece..10++++++++++

free verses but in a poetic flwo and melodious one..idea is rich and the expression iw weel done..composition of words is sound and heartfelt... well done friend 10++++++++

GREAT FLOW, GREAT RYTHM, AND YEAH WE ARE FOOLS, JUST TOOLS, WE ALWAYS HAVE THE WRONG TOOLS IN LIFE N LOVE TO FIX ARE OWN MESSES, BUT AS FRIENDS, WE ARE NO LONGER FOOLS, CUZ THEN IT SEEMS WE HAVE THE RIGHT DAMN TOOL..LOL 01S

Very good poem at fast tempo.