The Same Old Flame Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Same Old Flame



An old flame, once hot and affirm,
Spreading the gentle galore of fortune,
One possesses abundant, not known,
Tips of the fingers and the toes are just a form,
Touching of it sparkle not to shut down the fuse,
Rubbing the shoulders of memories at the interface,
Flames aglow, where the minds have thought alike,
An old flame still young, lively and vibrating,
In silent mode, thousands of full moon have had shown,
Their beautiful faces in seducing shine and sheen,
Bringing all their hosts of stars to show off,
A small old flame in their hearts has never given up,
The desire to glow bright and they have chosen the right path.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 13 February 2014

ahh....the desire to glow bright! inked it so well poet.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 February 2014

Maybe the flame is always young, it is the torch that gets old. Flame keeps burning without blowing off. Beautifully presented in the poem. Thank you.

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Noreen Carden 12 February 2014

Hello Veeraiyah I like this flame very much. Flames aglow, where the minds have thought alike. I love that line Well done

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Gajanan Mishra 11 February 2014

desire to glow bright, good writing, thanks.

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