The Saga Continues Poem by Matthias Pantaleon

The Saga Continues



Blood on the street;
The man who cast the first stone
was discharged and acquainted
While passersby were jailed

Cabal in the chambers;
Making treacherous remarks
Lady Justitia is not only shortsighted
The silence of her treachery is deafening

Customise looting spree;
Men of means are pardon of their sins
While men of straw burn in hell
A cleansing ritual to appease angry gods

Two mad men fighting without cause
One is protected with immunity clause

Monday, June 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: political
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 07 June 2016

It's a fine poem, Matthias. Just a couple of points. In the third line you use the word acquainted. Should It not be acquitted? In the third stanza pardon should be pardoned. Otherwise really good with a powerful theme well presented. Tom Billsborough

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Matthias Pantaleon

Matthias Pantaleon

Oronija Island, Nigeria
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