The Sacrifice Poem by louis rams

The Sacrifice

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i deamt that i was on top of a hill.
but this hill was just floating in space
it had no begining and no end
i was without family or friends-just loneliness surrounding me.
the pain i felt was so great-that i decided to jump off into space.
and as i was falling i was looking up.
when i saw what appeared to be-a long rubber hand
reaching out to me.-and when i felt myself falling far
he grabbed me like a little toy car.
i started to think-what can this be?
is it an alien reaching for me
or is this just gods outstretched hand
letting me know where i stand.
then the thought came to me-this is just like a baby
floating in its mothers womb.
waiting for it to be set free-and to give us all the love
it can-and live in this promised land..
this land of human sacrifice between a husband and his wife.
to sacrifice all that they can give-just so that
this child could live.
this sacrifice has to be great-for in god they put their faith.
so from this womb out i came
a child born with no name.
but thru their love i arrived-just in the nick of time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 16 April 2016

I am glad you liked this dream while being conceived

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Mary Murphy 08 November 2008

Great poem! =) After reading this I began to contemplate how lucky I am to have been given life, if my mother had decided to stop at 8 kids or less...my twin and I would not exist. Thanks for sharing, oh and I wrote a few more the other night.

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