The Rose Poem by louis rams

The Rose

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the rose is a beauty to behold
it is loved by most women on this earth
is it because the rose is like a woman?
when it opens up and spreads its petals
it shows the beauty within and the softness to the touch.
yet just like a woman it has its thorns to protect its beauty.
so is the woman who has been betrayed-she will never be the same
she will protect the beauty like a spider protects its web.

so this is what i see.

the beauty of a woman which is locked up inside
will bloom like a rose with nothing to hide.
her beauty will be admired by men of all nations
they'll try to get to her to feel the sensation.
the sensation of knowing she is the one
who could raise the setting sun.
so as men we have to take care
for once we get into their hair
they'll be no way of turning back
until she combs her hair and loosens up the slack.
she will have us like a spider has its web
and suck us dry until we're dead.
but! what a wonderful death it will be
as long as we live in harmony.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 12 April 2020

Something out of the way, but unique and interesting, well done

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Louis Rams 16 April 2020

thank you for your comment and words of praise

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 April 2020

The comparison of woman with rose and with spider is so attractive. Here I cite...the beauty of a woman which is locked up inside will bloom like a rose with nothing to hide....she will have us like a spider has its web and us dry until we're dead. A brilliant poem really.

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Louis Rams 16 April 2020

your words are touching and i thank you for it

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