Maya Hanson (mye3)


The Right Key - Poem by Maya Hanson (mye3)

Spinning
in circles
I can't concentrate
Messing up
everything the light
touches

My keyhole
it's waiting
It aches
every day
But I can't take
Letting you in

Why isn't
anyone coming
I'm still alone
But it's best
not to meddle
with time

I'm waiting
for the right partner
To take the night
all to ourselves
To be released
from this door
that I'm hiding behind

They have tried
People have tried
others not like you
But my door
won't open
for them

I'm locked
have to wait
For the right key
to arrive
My closed door
will creak open
Now that I'm chosen

I'm locked
have to wait
For the right key

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Comments about The Right Key by Maya Hanson (mye3)

  • Silver Star - 3,830 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/7/2013 12:21:00 PM)

    Aha a creative metaphoric wait for mr. Right. Wow! Kudos...yeah he wil come by. Hey pls answer my riddle poem. :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (12/7/2013 11:43:00 AM)

    we all wait for the right key in our life
    good poem with good imagery
    thanks for sharing and i invite you to read mine (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 7, 2013



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