The Right Approach Poem by Mary Spain

The Right Approach

Rating: 5.0


Do you recall that tiger at the zoo?
We tried so hard to make him look our way.
You whstled; but I said, 'It doesn't do
To whistle at a tiger. You should pay
Him more respect! ' Do you remember that
He moved one furry ear a fraction when
I called out, 'Hello, Tiger... ', as a cat
Will grant remote acknowledgement to men
Who recognise their place, 'You're beautiful, '
I breathed, '... so beautiful... ' his massive head
Turned slowly and two regal eyes blinked full
Agreement straight at mine. It could be said
That he was captive and that we were free,
But I was captured when he looked at me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 02 February 2010

How does one really define 'freedom? ' Excellent composition!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 December 2008

Fine captivating composition! nice imagery! ......10+++

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Yasser Koor 25 October 2008

oh it is amazing words nice poem and so beautiful. well done

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Bill Thomas 20 February 2008

Oh wow. Sometimes the proper response to a poem is awed silence, but a blank message wouldn't show up! Keep writing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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