! ! The Rhythm Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! ! The Rhythm

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The Rhythm
Rema Prasanna


Rhythm of your heartbeat was
the first melody I ever heard
from deep within on a comfort zone
I could sense the passion of that rhythm
so kind and so gentle
it surrounded me, draped me
like a caring embrace
a genuine tender perception
on which my life pulsated
I now know the rhythm of that
heartbeat is in me too as the most
precious rhythm bestowed from
one most caring heart,
most loving heart
Mother! I owe you my life for
that special rhythm…….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 03 May 2008

Yes, this rhythm is said to pulsate throughout our life, consciously or unconsciously we attach external and internal music to it, the beats follow this rhythm….well composed with the physiological as well as emotional insight….

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Kesav Easwaran 03 May 2008

syncronisation of rhythms here...the reader also feels the gentle rhythm of daughterly affection of a teenage heart... good poem, rema

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Richa Dhodi 11 May 2008

Nice poem rema. and ur true conscious and rthythm of love for your mother is affectionate.... ok keep going. nice slab :) ric..

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Usha Pisharody 21 May 2008

Gentle and tender! A lovely tribute!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 June 2008

well written about tender emotions.good work

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Antonio Liao 27 July 2008

every moment we take a rhythm we make.....Wow! such a wonderful reflection.... your lyrics inflame my heart.thank you.... a continuation of woman a mother

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Blue Eyes 13 July 2008

reading the poem i had to comment because each time i read it i feel more touched by the words.a great way of mixing pics and music and love

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Wanelisa Albert 10 July 2008

your poetry moves me..however this one takes me a level deeper than i dared to go.....It makes me value my mother even more

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 July 2008

A heart felt rhythm touching all heart when you read this beautiful poem by a talented poet.

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Raj Nandy 05 July 2008

A beautiful piece of poetry! Should get well publicised especially on Mother's Day! -Raj Nandy

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