The Rain Song Poem by Nikunj Sharma

The Rain Song

Rating: 5.0


The little tear,
the cloud just shed
Gravity placed
On my forhead

The eternal kiss
Stroke of bliss
Feeling of hope and cheer
How could be brought by a tear

Poor soul didn't understand
Love of sky sent to land
A gift, heart sent
A riveting moment
Sky's tear
My crown
Island of relief
In ocean of frown

A tear brought moisterous mirth;
To the heart of mother earth.
Cats and dogs drumming their beat;
For wandering soul, what a treat! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

nice rain song, we people in chennai can only read rain songs, but we hardly see rain here...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 11 July 2009

great! chosen words are nice! .....10+

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Miriam Maia Padua 13 July 2009

very nice... The rain is so visible and I can feel a raindropp on my forehead very refreshing... 10+++ lovelots, maia

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Ken E Hall 15 July 2009

A happy raining ditty with a tear on my forehead I feel like singing in the rain nice work Nikunj ++++++10 regards

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 16 July 2009

The beauty of rain... well engineered by your pen...

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Deborah Cromer 20 July 2009

Nice. Your description is amazing. Good write! DC

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Christina Phan 20 July 2009

kool i want to dance in it now hehe 10++

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Sandhya S N 18 July 2009

Rain is always a treat to nature regards sandhya

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The eternal kiss Stroke of bliss Feeling of hope and cheer How could be brought by a tear lovely write and thoughtful too...... read mine rain delay, , rain has come and merci o rain god

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dr veenaa rai 16 July 2009

rain can mean so many different things to different people.beautiful composition, keep it up!

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