oh destiny of my life
show me his honesty
give me clues and signs
thru his words and integrity..
oh my angel of fate
guide me as you always do
don’t leave unanswered questions
let me know if he loves me too...
oh my prince of time
let me know my future
let the days pass without distinction
straighten the warped trail easy on foot..
oh wisdom of truth
bless me with unending intelligence
in the field of poetry I inscribe
that brings happiness to my life..
Sounds solemn and sincere although I think He and His ought to be capitalised. H
A wonderful heartwritten poem...full of honesty my friend...your select lines are so touching...it really is a beautiful poem 10++...no doubt
As beautiful as your first prayer poem was, Lady Grace, this new one is a little bit more beautiful. Once again, you have focused your fine words into a lovely statement of faith. It was a pleasure to read this wonderful poem. Carl.
Very dear and heartfelt. Nice work on this beautiful piece of art. DC
wow......such a fantastic theme.........great work i love the jumping off the subject...like a charming rabbit hopping one at a time...........10
Excelente! very good, you got my 10+, Keep it up! , Love and Peace, Romeo
Patience and true faith answers all querries and heal all wounds. True payer is unconditional surrender, no scope for doubts or questions in it. However, it's great poetry. Thanks for sharing it. CP
oh wisdom of truth bless me the unending intelligence in the field of poetry I inscribe that brings happiness to my life........prayer may help you all the ime with actingas clear beacon inlife..very good and heart touching....10 redmine o, lord...prayer...prayer for friend and new..u will not rain
very nice...really touching like a soft sound playing in the air I love the flow, my friend.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nicley written in very nice form. Prayers I find are the hardest to write about/for, as they are so personal, and sometimes what is conveyed is not actually what was intended at all, however this is very nicely penned....