# The Positive Energy Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Positive Energy

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Where from will this flow into me
from what, from whom.from where
where from will this flow into you

from a stone worn on hand would it
from a shrine claiming divine would it
from one who claims to be divine himself would it

one through his yogic penance...claims
to have got this energies essence..captued
into a 'linga' in his premises...A SHRINE

a serene and calm place it is
the music of the flute there...did almost
put me to sleep in my trying to meditate

YET..A CAPTURED ENERGY DID NOT SEEM POSITIVE
EVEN TO THE SMALL 'me'

on my way back....a stop over
amidst the woods near a river..the uncaptured
chill river on my feet and breeze on my chest touched my soul

still live, free and positive are they
a captured... even if shrined and serene
POSITIVE ENERGY is'nt there i feel

IT IS 'CAUGHT' WITHIN ME
IT IS 'FREE' BEYOND ME
IT IS ALL AROUND WAITING FOR ME

THIS POSITIVE ENERGY

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 24 May 2009

the science of energy in poetic application to life.........beyond explanation...10+++

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Indira Renganathan 24 May 2009

True, the divine or cosmic energy is in and around us...good attempt

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Naidz Ladia 24 May 2009

'a serene and calm place it is the music of the flute there...did almost put me to sleep in my trying to meditate'..positive energies are alwys coming from our positive vibrations...naizz

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Sandra Martyres 24 May 2009

Yes as Indira says we are surrounded by cosmic energy......the focus of this poem..good write

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Carol Gall 24 May 2009

love this positive energy giood poem

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Louis Rams 02 June 2009

an energtic poem, deep in mystery

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mine is called confidence... good write

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Subbaraman N V 27 May 2009

Yes, that precisely sustains us! A nice write!

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Joseph Poewhit 26 May 2009

We all project and hold a certain amount of energy.

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Ken E Hall 26 May 2009

well crafted with your own positive energy ++10.. from my own humble self I believe the biggest charge of positive energy comes from which I send to you is a SMILE''' regards

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