The Perfect Kill (Q Style) Poem by Marcus McKinley
The Perfect Kill (Q Style)
Like the final scream of a banzai warrior
Dedicated to the cause
Focused
She zeroed in
On my heart without pause
Her words like a samurai blade
Found there mark
swiftly
Cut deep without feeling
My soul slid apart
Cast a sunder
From the essence of her very breath
withered
My love now lay
on the point of death
No more can I endure
I thought she was through
Decisively
She finished me off with
'I never loved you'
This is a poem written in a style/form that i am trying to create and perfect. i call it (Q style)
QUINTESSENCE: A five line stanza with the third line being a single descriptive word relating to the other four lines of the stanza
It hurt a little to read this poem. Your words are so expressive I could almost feel the pain myself. I enjoyed the Q style.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 2:51:00 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Excellent piece. I love the pace and the metapors. A strong finish. We never hear enough about the downsides of love.