The Paths Of Rain Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

The Paths Of Rain

Rating: 3.5


'No one, no one could ever guess
How deep the pain of my distress
Even when I loose the winds in sigh
Still it was decided that I
Must be hidden from paths of rain
To be forever with this chains'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sj Holland 02 October 2013

Yes, sometimes rain, though melancholy, is needed to wash away ugliness and parched dryness. Rain is a recycler of life. It comes down and goes back up, to return again and heal. Profound opening: ...'No one, no one could ever guess How deep the pain of my distress... With those two simple, little lines is conveyed wrenching agony.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 01 October 2013

Profound feelings well expressed through a verse.

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Unbreakable Heart 27 September 2013

It was great James, but it gives me an idea that you are struggling for pain, are you? if that anyways it will heals in time~ Cheer up :) |

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Marvin Brato 26 September 2013

Thought provoking, pain heals with time!

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