The Palette In The Sky Poem by Diane ForthEglon

The Palette In The Sky

Rating: 5.0


Soft, pastel-pink, aqua, sepia
Turning sharp, gold, striking
The sky is a willing canvas
Waiting to be kissed by the palette of colours
Multi-shaded layers dapple the heavens
The pace of life is set to slow
Announced by the sleepy, restful sun
Her dying honey-hued rays
Cast playful shadows
Open to interpretation!
Intriguing, mysterious
Creating an air of curiosity
Liquid gold outlines the classic oak tree
So near and yet so far!
The firefly dances with excitement
Her luminous tail aglow
And the song thrush folds down her wings
Relaxing in the still warm air
Soft peach clings to the buildings
While strong apricot dresses the windows
From liquid gold to burnt orange
Now a mauve sheet covers the horizon
The crisp silhouette of the tawny owl
Graces the evening magenta sky
And the crickets begin their shrill song
Heralding the arrival of the long, dark night
The smooth, creamy moon and the twinkling stars
Commence their clandestine affair
Wildlife dare not relax
Predators lurk in the jet black ether!
Gradually the backdrop loses its ebony
And the scenery takes on an intense cobalt blue
The gentle dawn is slowly approaching
The softest lilac bedecks a fresh morning sky
Iridescent speckles espied through the laurel bush
Dewdrops like glass drape the orchid
Reflecting the fiery citrus blanket above
Before turning warm lemon and cheerful azure blue
This kaleidoscopic carpet starts its journey
On a never-ending cycle of wonder

The Palette In The Sky
Thursday, October 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When my husband was still alive he was looking out the window around dusk time and told me to come over and look. We were awestruck and I knew I had to write about it. It's about the colours in the sky from dusk to dawn
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 08 October 2015

Wonderful poem Gave you a 10. i could not give you more. There is no possibility to give more. it is the highest. just wondered how much time you would have spent to think, to coin, to fit together words, adjectives and fill the description.. marvelous work. thank you. tony

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Kelly Kurt 08 October 2015

A lovely, vivid description, Diane. Thank you

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Fabrizio Frosini 08 October 2015

a minute-by-minute great description of the dawn rising.. Thanks for sharing, Diane

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