The Pain And Pricks. Poem by Gangadharan nair Pulingat..

The Pain And Pricks.

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A hook in the neck
The fish alarmed in fear
The pricking pain it suffer
Fellow fishes swam in distance
Caught in the hook
The pain in prick unbearable.
The man who in fishing
A good catch he expects
The hooks so sharpened ones
The preys always live fishes
The small one the preys.
The world here and there
Hooks are ready with small preys
Never it bite in belief
Danger for the life itself
No one to help the victim
Hooch, narcotics and abuse
The real hooks that makes pricks
The endanger of human life.

Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The hooks with preys always endanger the life. when it relates to substance abuse it dangerous to humans altogether.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 November 2014

The human has became a mute audience they can see but they can't help- fishes they don't have the way yet we have...very nice poem penned - -a message - it must be noted thank you sir

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