The Open Eyes Poem by Muhammad Shanazar

The Open Eyes



How often a thought of unfair deeds,
Terribly haunt my vain guilty mind,
Shaking inner self, core of conscience,
The wanton pleasures of indelible past,
Become tormenting, painfully torturous,
Make troublesome the whole existence,
And running substance changes into gall.

I set once my sheep and goats free,
To graze in the uneven green pasture.
Seeing something edible in my hands,
A bird after hovering over my head,
Rested slight afar, at distance safe,
Out of breath, bent the eyes to me,
With hopeful accosting innocent gaze.

It was beautiful, all shining blue,
But against cherished hope in mind,
I hurled a round stone with force full,
That fell too heavy on the too weak,
Instantly the delicate breathing life,
Was lying prostrate, crumbled, motionless,
With loose legs and flexible wings,
The limp neck hung with ajar beak,
The open eyes queried complainingly,
“O! Man what wrong did I do to thee? ”
And I justified not the deed in response.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 16 May 2008

sensitive write, , , , some good lines indeed, ,

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Uzma Jamil 27 February 2008

The poem is a beautiful account of how on certain occasions an impulsive action can cause a sense of guilt and constant repentance for all times to come. A stone hurled with full force fell heavily on a weak bird and: Instantly the delicate breathing life, Was lying prostrate, crumbled, motionless, Tha limb neck hung with ajar beak, ''O! Man what wrong did I do to thee? '' Take care. Truly Uzma.

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