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Unwritten Soul


The One Who Live In Me


Runaway from all shadows
Away from all wild voices
To the end of the world edge
Till the last stop to step
Runaway and away
No place i would stay
But still,
You are the one
The one who live in me
Till the last age u are...in me

If my heart does understand me
It never less than what you know
Perhaps it could be more
Because only you
My soul,
The only one,
The one who live in me
Know me more than anyone else
We are not alone but as one, in life

In the darkness
Breathing with no air
Or walking by the bleeding feet
Listen it again that we will going through
With you, and me we will always be as one
Hurting once and know it's not the last
That is what life warns us
The high and low time
So the people let their minds on us
Their thought a broken shell to repair
But they never know how to fix
Do they understand within us
Inside you and me...ours
How it feels, pain
They never
But you, I knew
My soul that feels mine
The one who live in me

Only...
Only my outside
Outside the territory of my body
You will ever know but cant be more
Because behind the reflection of my face
Unseen our hidden true and grace
Where your right not belong here
Change heart of mine to hurt
Take over life like yours
Because i was born with someone
Someone who be with me since long
The one who knows secrets and me
The one
The one who live within me
This soul, my survivor soul


Voices in the crowd
Living in people around
In my closed eyes
To me
Only one sound
Alone in loyal company
Sight in the darkness
Whenever i found you
To believe and walk with
The one who exists in me
This life we share in our body
Shall not we surrender on things
Till the last age of my written destiny
I'll be strong with the one within me
My soul, your unwritten soul
The one who live in me
For this life, our short life

Submitted: Friday, March 29, 2013
Edited: Friday, March 29, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is the writing that maybe nonsense to some
but it always make sense to me, Unwritten Soul
it just a write where i just to say myself
That we are living this life, not with just body and feels
but the sense of mind and soul, who be with us
that make up who we are, as only we know who we are
there always people around us but they cant guide you
if we never let our soul to sail our life in the right way
either good or bad they will come and hurt or make us smile
but if we cant learn to find self, and soul
we will forever lost...lost in paradise_Unwritten Soul

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  • Rookie - 67 Points Rekha Mandagere (4/18/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    Respect for one's soul is very important so that we can avoid many miseries in life. Best thought, best expression! Nice read: : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (4/2/2013 6:18:00 AM)

    nice one. We all are looking for a person to give us the right guidence and the true way. Some 1 to make us feel superiour and better.but if we found that person(the best one in our ideas) some of us still think that there is something wrong and its because of a problem and the problem is that we dont know our selfs well.we dont reach our souls.
    Very well.very well.perfect
    This poem is so meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Shahzia Batool (4/2/2013 1:03:00 AM)

    Light and lovely poem...not at all silly...you have poured forth your soul in this poem...an enjoyable read... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,381 Points Lyn Paul (3/30/2013 10:01:00 AM)

    You express yourself so very well and give something to so many who suffer being just.... themsleves. Great work Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 273 Points Poetheart Morgan (3/30/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    Hello Soul, what a beautiful expression of our souls. I agree with you, no paradise! We have to live and try to find our balance. Once more you teach us or remember us body and Soul. Kisses friend! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,196 Points Hans Vr (3/30/2013 5:57:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, Soul.
    I agree very much with you, what you express in the poem and in your notes.
    If we cannot find our soul, we tend to be lost in paradise.
    Our soul knows the Truth (with capital T) and we have to try to connect, to tune in to our soul.
    When we try to connect to our Creator, it is through our soul.
    Fantastic insights in the spriitual part of our being are expressed here
    Excllent! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (3/30/2013 2:04:00 AM)

    Soul... this piece defines your work... your voice... your heart...your soul. It is a magnificant Write. (thank you for your comments on my most recent ;) Peace and Joy be with you...always.
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,254 Points Diane Hine (3/30/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    Our minds certainly seem to be multi-dimensional and so we are often able to 'enjoy our own company',
    but it's never quite enough so we have to communicate with others too (even though it's sometimes difficult) .
    A thoughtful poem which explores the essence of self-fulfilment. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,461 Points Neela Nath (3/30/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    Soul, to run away from the madding crowd, to stay in one's self, to know one's own soul all these come from a sensitive soul. You are actually like that.Kudos again dear to your talent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nader Baheri (3/29/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    another great work.i always enjoy reading your works.i like specifically the last two parts.
    I think you have said your inner feelings in the poetical way and as your unwritten soul.we sometimes feel to run away from people and hide ourselves and be settled where only our soul and us are alone.
    Yes only you yourself and God know your soul.
    Let me add some thing at the end.

    In the latest twentieth i wish i had far from others
    when three of us would be alone
    God, me and my soul

    kudos~nb (Report) Reply

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