The One Who Live In Me Poem by Unwritten Soul

The One Who Live In Me

Rating: 4.5


Runaway from all shadows
Away from all wild voices
To the end of the world edge
Till the last stop to step
Runaway and away
No place i would stay
But still,
You are the one
The one who live in me
Till the last age u are...in me

If my heart does understand me
It never less than what you know
Perhaps it could be more
Because only you
My soul,
The only one,
The one who live in me
Know me more than anyone else
We are not alone but as one, in life

In the darkness
Breathing with no air
Or walking by the bleeding feet
Listen it again that we will going through
With you, and me we will always be as one
Hurting once and know it's not the last
That is what life warns us
The high and low time
So the people let their minds on us
Their thought a broken shell to repair
But they never know how to fix
Do they understand within us
Inside you and me...ours
How it feels, pain
They never
But you, I knew
My soul that feels mine
The one who live in me

Only...
Only my outside
Outside the territory of my body
You will ever know but cant be more
Because behind the reflection of my face
Unseen our hidden true and grace
Where your right not belong here
Change heart of mine to hurt
Take over life like yours
Because i was born with someone
Someone who be with me since long
The one who knows secrets and me
The one
The one who live within me
This soul, my survivor soul


Voices in the crowd
Living in people around
In my closed eyes
To me
Only one sound
Alone in loyal company
Sight in the darkness
Whenever i found you
To believe and walk with
The one who exists in me
This life we share in our body
Shall not we surrender on things
Till the last age of my written destiny
I'll be strong with the one within me
My soul, your unwritten soul
The one who live in me
For this life, our short life

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the writing that maybe nonsense to some
but it always make sense to me, Unwritten Soul
it just a write where i just to say myself
That we are living this life, not with just body and feels
but the sense of mind and soul, who be with us
that make up who we are, as only we know who we are
there always people around us but they cant guide you
if we never let our soul to sail our life in the right way
either good or bad they will come and hurt or make us smile
but if we cant learn to find self, and soul
we will forever lost...lost in paradise_Unwritten Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 02 April 2013

Light and lovely poem...not at all silly...you have poured forth your soul in this poem...an enjoyable read...

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 April 2013

nice one. We all are looking for a person to give us the right guidence and the true way. Some 1 to make us feel superiour and better.but if we found that person(the best one in our ideas) some of us still think that there is something wrong and its because of a problem and the problem is that we dont know our selfs well.we dont reach our souls. Very well.very well.perfect This poem is so meaningful.

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Frank James Davis 31 March 2013

Profoundly wise and utterly lovely!

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Valerie Dohren 31 March 2013

Without a soul we would be as automatons - beautiful Soul.

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Nader Baheri 29 March 2013

another great work.i always enjoy reading your works.i like specifically the last two parts. I think you have said your inner feelings in the poetical way and as your unwritten soul.we sometimes feel to run away from people and hide ourselves and be settled where only our soul and us are alone. Yes only you yourself and God know your soul. Let me add some thing at the end. In the latest twentieth i wish i had far from others when three of us would be alone God, me and my soul kudos~nb

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Mj Lemon 08 May 2020

Amazing verse, Soul. We are never alone, and that companion within can indeed can make us 'strong.' Is this the conscience, the soul, the spirit? Are these different words for the same thing, or is each inner being somewhat different? I find the communication takes place in or through thoughts, with words that provide easy definitions somehow elusive. Such a great verse, Soul!

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Rebecca Navarre 16 December 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! How Breathtakingly Beautiful! ! ! ! ! Powerful And Deep! ! ! ! ! With Such Beautiful Heart! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Soul This Does Speak! ! ! ! ! Love It! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2017

We must know who are we? What is soul and where is it? Then we can give respect to other's soul. Dear Soul, you have nicely and astutely inscribed this poem. Here some lines may be quoted..... Only... Only my outside Outside the territory of my body You will ever know but cant be more Because behind the reflection of my face Unseen our hidden true and grace Where your right not belong here Change heart of mine to hurt Take over life like yours Because i was born with someone Someone who be with me since long The one who knows secrets and me The one The one who live within me This soul, my survivor soul A great poem presented touchingly.

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Rekha Mandagere 18 April 2013

Respect for one's soul is very important so that we can avoid many miseries in life. Best thought, best expression! Nice read: : -)

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Jaira Joyce Tentoco 16 April 2013

I agree. This is a good one. :) 0.......

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