The One...Not! Poem by Alex Lees

The One...Not!

Rating: 4.2


If you love someone
Tell them
If not!
Don't play with their feelings.

Feelings?
I start to cry,
when he leaves.
Then he comes back,
he sees me cry.
He tries to wipe the tears away,
and I look at him in his eyes.
i cry again and agian but you say Stop and hold me forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Christina Simmons 17 March 2017

I really liked reading this poem: it got me to reflect back to past experiences. There seem to be an awful lot of people playing around with the emotions of others. Particularly if you fall under the category of vulnerability: often mistaken for stupidity. Congratulation! ! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 March 2017

Feelings of love! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 March 2017

Wipe the tears away...... congrats on being selected....

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A. Madhavan 17 March 2017

So your love sentiment, reciprocated or not, has made it to PH as the Poem of the Day. Glad of it. Now I know. what readers like.

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Tom Allport 17 March 2017

a love hurts poem not to be forgot? nicely written!

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Lyn Paul 17 March 2018

Our feelings and emotions are valuable. We all want to be loved either as a person or in a shared, loving relationship.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 17 March 2018

A poem that bathes with emotions. Thanks for the sharing and congrats for the POTD.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 March 2018

Congrats, a well deserved selection as member's poem of the day, feelings of one in love nicely penned.

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Prativa Rani 17 March 2018

Beautiful poem shared.

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Savita Tyagi 17 March 2018

Very expressive poem. Love is such a complex emotion to tackle. Just when we think we know all about it.......it turns around to take a different angle.

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