The One Poem by Tyler Tuck

The One

Rating: 5.0


your the girl i see in my dreams
your the one whos eyes shine and face beams
your the one who i think about before bed
your the one who has eyes of green and hair of red

your the one who i hate to miss
your the one whos presence is pure bliss
your the one who has a quiet voice but a loud roar
your the one who ive fallen for

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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