The Ocean Poem by Broken Angel

The Ocean

Rating: 4.8


The ocean breeze blows,
my hair flows,
seeing the waves crash,
along the rocks.
~
A beautiful place,
for one's inspiration,
see all the beauty,
that God as created.
~
Within this ugly world,
you can still find,
something so amazing,
as this one ocean.
~
Feel the sand,
so soft,
and comforting,
its a total bliss,
to see.
: : end: :

written: 11/6/05

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 15 September 2006

I love the Ocean too, but why see end in the ocean? why not endless beginnings? Preets

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