The Night Poem by Fathmath Sana

The Night

Rating: 5.0


i'll tell you about night,
which brings me fright,

when the sea swallows the sun,
the night comes to fade all the fun,

she loves to creep,
over the country and make everything look like they are in sleep,

when the whole place becomes dark,
the frightened dogs bark,

and gaining my courage, i reach for the candle,
and holds it with shaking hands, i could barely handle,

at the window as i stand,
while clutching the windowpane with my hand,

I shake with fear,
and wonder my fate here,

but as i pray for my god,
the sun shows its rays gold,

and once again the glasses brighten of the cars,
and the night fleds away with her stars!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

wow this is simply great...hey i like rhymes.....lovely wonderful poem indeed... ohhh sana you can definitely write...this is simply great.....A++ with lots of love shan

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

lovely piece here dear friend.. well done

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Muhammad Ali 13 April 2009

Night... or it is the Day....... it has to go Nice work Sana

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Sameer Ahmed 10 April 2009

A nice way of describing the fear you feel of that specificity of night you mentioned.........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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