zainab zaheen

Rookie (jan 2 1989 / Colombo)

The New Beginning - Poem by zainab zaheen

Is this how the New Year is going to be?
Now we live in a world
where we don't know when will disaster strikes us.
With new technology
more disastrous weapons of mass destruction are made.
With advancing armies preparing for war.
I wish the world leaders would make Peace with each other.
And hope they use that money to feed the poor
and the places where there is famine.
I wish that all the troubles and pains of the people would go away.
The people who are homeless would have decent homes to live in.
I hope all the people would have their rights and dignity back.


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Author notes:

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By Zainab Zaheen, © 2011, All rights reserved

(xoxo)


Comments about The New Beginning by zainab zaheen

  • Rookie - 0 Points Emily Angel (8/19/2011 11:03:00 AM)

    Really interesting and carries a strong message...I have been here once....Wishing this world was a better place to live...Excellent write! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/17/2011 9:09:00 AM)

    I wish also new beginning of the humane world.Well done and message well established here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Esther Ayala (8/17/2011 2:11:00 AM)

    I like this one too. thanks 4 inviting me to read your poems. This one kinda reminds me of my poem 'A world far from love.' I agree with Debra, we all can contribute, but the real solution will be in God. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gary Manning (8/16/2011 8:30:00 PM)

    I like it..8 I'd like to read more of you poems and will do so. Hope you read mine as well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (8/16/2011 12:23:00 PM)

    Wishing everything going be ok. you put your emotional and thoughts thought this poems very goood job on that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Debra Martin (8/16/2011 8:43:00 AM)

    What a cry from the heart! ! ! I too wish the world could be a better place. We all can contribute to making this world a better place. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (8/15/2011 8:59:00 PM)

    This poem is an eye opener.Definitely worth hall of fame. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 15, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 16, 2011


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