The Never Ending Circle Poem by Tango

The Never Ending Circle

Rating: 3.5


THE NEVER ENDING CIRCLE

On awakening, you rise out of bed,
clean your teeth, and take a shower,
put on your clothes, and brush your head.
Breakfast is consumed, at a rapid pace,
into your car, and off you go,
to join the slavery race.

Head down, and butt up all day,
trying hard to convince the boss,
that you are worthy of your pay.
Five o'clock comes, and home you go.
turn on the television,
may be, watch a show.

A microwave meal, is consumed,
while the stereo plays,
your favourite tunes.
Then into the shower, for a nice hot scrub,
if you are lucky,
someone gives your back, a rub.
Into bed with pajamas on,
now the circle is complete,
for you are right back where you started from.
Tango.

Sunday, July 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 October 2016

Of life n duty n work n earning a living yeah I notice a lively super rhyme scheme to the routine here which makes us nod in acknowledgement both at that n the reality of routine. Kudos pet.. Pls do comment my latest poem too called, POETRY COMMENTARY......

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

Well written and relatable, Tango. Thank you

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Tango 25 July 2016

Thank you Simone for your comment, yes you are so right. One day you look in the mirror and think is that really me, where have all those years gone, it was only yesterday and I was 20. Thank you once more, take carer. Trevor (Tango)

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 July 2016

And how the years pass so quickly with all the rituals and routines of home and work. Lovely poem Tango...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 July 2016

Very, very amazing poem this composed wisely.10

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