# The Mother Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Mother

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every day
every single day
you carry on your way

no disgust shown
not tired or worn
not a dropp of sweat from your brow
kisses the ground
with that pleasant smiley round

every day
every single day
you carry on your way

not a duty or compulsion you show
you touch every bit of this earth
that you have given birth...with joy
you touch every life on this earth
that it has given birth..with pride and joy
the granny and mummy you are
that pleasant smiley round...THE SUN

with that joy in your face
every day
every single day
you carry on your way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maitreyee Joshi 16 May 2009

an expression so true to the image of every mother.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

Mother takes joy in serving her children; nothing else can give her satisfaction..a very good poem my friend.

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Indira Renganathan 17 May 2009

Yes, every mother is great including your own children's mother...good poem with a good refrain

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Vidi Writes 18 May 2009

This is a conception of mother Universally accepted. How amny such mothers can be there ever smiling? ? ? The toil of day takes away the smile from her But its sure.. behind evry different face of a mother Strong loving pulpitations takes shape each bit of a second. Good read. Thank you.

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Carl Harris 19 May 2009

Well, this is a fine poem, one that's well written and expressed, and creates a loving portrait of what many of us think a mother should be, samanyan. Thanks for this excellent poem and fine read. Carl.

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Krishnarasa Seshadri 26 February 2010

beautifully written sir! it is touching!

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~ Jon London ~ 19 June 2009

A beautifully written dedication piece to the most precious love...that of a mother.....great piece Sam...thanks for the share

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Reshma Ramesh 07 June 2009

great tribute to the best person on earth.....mom! ! well penned

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Priyanka Bhowmick 05 June 2009

the perfect picturisation of a Mother... the 2nd n 4th stanza touched me a lot.10 up for this.

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 June 2009

great and brilliant poem... no disgust shown as it continues to shine the world everyday... every single day to watch over her children giving light and life to every living things on earth... the very proof of God's wisdom...The Sun... what would life be without this pleasant smiley round? a wonderful poem of nature's gift...of God's gift.. The mystery of His wisdom... and as human, we have to take part in protecting it... to let it continue to carry on its way.. a very fruitful share, my friend... 10++++ l♥ vel♥ ots, maia

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