The Most Beautiful Poem (Sonnet) Poem by Aufie Zophy

The Most Beautiful Poem (Sonnet)

Rating: 4.7


How I wish I would have the special words
To write the very most fantastic verse
I would pen it down with feathers of birds
write the nicest poem in the universe

I would dip the colourful plume in ink
That is magic and wonderfully blue
Using gothic letters of which I think
Anyone could see they were made for you

And this world would be full with jealous eyes
They would all be envying you so much
All people ‘d turn their heads towards the skies
Wish a poem was written for them as such

But this one was for you and you alone
A superb poem, with a wonderful tone

Thursday, December 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beautiful,love,poems,poetry,writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Please take a look at my 2 other attempts tow write sonnets too.
They are:
1. The golden key
2. The song of heaven
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 10 December 2015

indeed a blessed gift to give poems, perfect poems... NIcE! ! ! !

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 10 December 2015

A non-comparable expression of heartfelt love, real romantic way. Excellent write.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 02 February 2017

Oops! The last verses do not rhyme. But this one was for you and you alone The most beautiful poem, with a wonderful tone. (suggestion) . Keep on writing.

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Hans Vr 03 February 2017

Many thanks, Herbert. You are right about the last verses. Good suggestion to use tone.

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Joseph Anderson 16 January 2016

I love the sonnet form and this one is true in style, form and substance.We all would like to write the line immortal..Very well done

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Unwritten Soul 03 January 2016

Beautiful, i see that you tried many form of poetry and thats a very nice idea to make you be one of the real poet..love this one very much

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Paul Sebastian 11 December 2015

Beautifully written, metered well with the rhymes.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 December 2015

Superb desire expressed in an excellent poem. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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