The Morning Triolet [a Triolet Poem] Poem by prashant shaurya

The Morning Triolet [a Triolet Poem]

Rating: 5.0


Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet
heavenly pearls roll down my lawn...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and rainbows on the sky are drawn
the cuckoo sings some melody sweet...
Each day when sun rises at dawn
and on their perch the sparrows tweet...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bursting with beauty.

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Nikunj Sharma 10 January 2010

This is indeed a finely crafted poem, smooth in its flow, musical in its rhythm and meaningful in its content....good work prashant..I am giving it a 10...pls read my poem called AU REVOIR

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Chigemezi Nnadozie Wogu 12 January 2010

Nice one, but I think you did not complete it. For me it is incomplete, although it epitomizes the morning glories and miracles of each passing day, you should complete that poem because it will be better of. thanks for sharing.

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Chitra - 06 January 2010

a nice triolet poem, about nature's wonders

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Mark Nwagwu 06 January 2010

this is beautiful, Prashant; you capture the brilliance and joys of nature's gifts. mark

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Sreeram Vasudevan 14 December 2010

good one! keep up the good work

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Dorcas J Kimosop 25 January 2010

a very beautiful piece............. wow thts nice

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Obinna Eruchie 20 January 2010

The arrival of the dawn complement by birds' jovial song makes the morning beautiful. A lovely piece penned!

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Ejaz Khan 17 January 2010

Nice work Prashant, yes, each day is a repetetion of a wonder, we never get tire of!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 January 2010

very musical..a good one for a triolet...very well done

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