The More Right? Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

The More Right?



While thinking what I would have thought
had I just been,
or been just,
caught at a level-crossing
after two and a half hours ago
having been caught behind a woman and five girls
at the ticket and candy counter
of that good children's movie, P,
when I was going to K
and could have seen two more
that were starting at the same time,

I thought I would have thought
about justice and bad luck,
which I wouldn't have thought about
had I not just,
or just not,
been caught.

Monday, February 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: language
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
P = Paddington
K = Kingsman
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Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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