# # The Moon Within Me Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
# # The Moon Within Me
there it was..the moon
lying in the shallow rain water
a shaky moon..never
very sure of itself
what would happen to this moon....
i thought.....tomorrow
when the sun would drink off this shallow
what would happen to this moon tomorrow
ooh.....silly fellow
the moon would be safe up above..actually...
actually that was'nt the question in my mind
it was the astonishment that the scene left behind
the milky white moon was milky white
even when lying in that dirty shallow state
like i soppose the ' GOD ' in me....even
even inspite of the dirty shallow within me
very meaningful...brilliant thoughts shared flows with depth... expressed the unconditional love of God... ''the milky white moon was milky white even when lying in that dirty shallow state like i suppose the '' GOD '' in me....even even inspite of the dirty shallow within me'' i love these lines... 10+++++
just a total surrender of all the wrecked of wave in our life.... it still stands and survives.... a poem that whistle the beginning of hope....wonderful my friend....God bless...a 10++++
What a deep piece...the visual imagery is staggeringly good....well penned Sam...I'm a fan
Meeru Samanyan kadhandi Baga bethavazhlandi! A transfiguration occurs In the soul of the reader When he with you stands And looks up in awe and wonder Into the face of God! Thanks for inviting me to your world I know I am going to read a lot more too! No wonder, this too joins my favourites! regards Angel
Ah lovely philosophy.....Visishtadvaita? but i don agree with 'dirty, shallow with you', coz nobody has it...only some choose to have it sometimes.....
the milky white moon was milky white even when lying in that dirty shallow state There lies the highlight of this poem. Nicely written. Good to read.
As long as there are poets like you, Sam, the Moon will keep shining and smiling for us. Great poem! : -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Even the Lotus grow in murky water....great thought and metaphor