The Moon Managed To Erase The Distance Poem by Carmela Patterson

The Moon Managed To Erase The Distance

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When I remember your leaving for a far off land
miles stretched for seventeen hours of flight
moon hanging heavily upon my heart;
my tears were as many as the stars;
missing you before you left, I felt bereft
of your presence, of your essence.

As I thought of you on Air India flying to Bangladesh
realization became my friend; I actualized
the same sun shining over me shone also upon you,
the same lunar blessing over me glowed over you
closing the gap between us like a warm navy comforter;
the moon managed to erase the distance
until you returned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 04 February 2012

I think this is a fantastic, truly wonderful observation. We all enjoy the same sun and moon, making us somehow close together. Great poem, Mel. Very wise

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