The Moon Poem by Susanta Pattnayak

The Moon

Rating: 4.8


When dark drops down through the pine pins
And when a baby dove
Closes herself to her mother's warm wings
Then, through the stripes of the coconut leaves
The moon
Descends on earth, onto the darkness
With glorious bright lily hues
And, perhaps in shame or in fear
The darkness hides itself
In the narrow corner of some lonely cave
Or recedes to the thin cover of some wild bush

When, I stand mesmerized look
At the zebra stripes
Of the coconut leaves
Up against the sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 04 April 2014

I invite you to read my poem, The Breath Of The Moon as I too love to gaze at her beauty. It's interesting to see the moon from r perspective, on your side of the globe. One moon that all can share. Your write was a lovely reflection of such. PEACE

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Hans Vr 04 October 2012

Superb poetry. I do like moon poems and this is among the very best.

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Susanta Pattnayak

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Bhubaneswar, India
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