The Monster In Your Head Poem by Broken heart emo
The Monster In Your Head
Description: The lines outside the brackets are said by a girl who is talking to herself and the lines inside the brackets is a voice inside her head which she hates
I can do this (you know you can't)
I'm not a loser (who are you kidding)
I'm not weak (come on, you practically cry yourself to sleep)
I'll make it through (yea because you have no other choice)
They like me (like you? You don't even like yourself)
I will not cry again (then why are your eyes all red?)
I'm beautiful (then why don't you look at yourself in the mirror)
I will not let them push me down (you know you can't stand up for yourself)
I'm me (then why do you fake yourself to be poplular?)
STOP IT (stop what? I'm just telling what you don't want to see! Stop fooling yourself, you're a loser and you'll always be)
I kinda agree with Stephen Buoro. Even though the concept is creative, isn't doesn't exactly 'feel' like a poem. continue writing and you'll improve. Remember 'Life's a learning experience'
This is really different and cool! ! I like the imaginative thoughts in her mind, and how it contrasts with her life outside. i enjoyed it! ! very dramatic: D
Brilliant text I really enjoyed the ride. But don't let the head girl grind you down. ;) Regards Craig.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 11:39:52 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I liked it, but it seems like a self esteem issue. I would love to see it continue and developed that the girl slowly grinds the inside voice and triumphs over the voice. Maybe she can attack the voice... Thx.