The Medicinal Relief! Poem by Shahzia Batool
The Medicinal Relief!
In a spark
of some unconscious imagination
Or in an intuitively telescoped montage
Of my deep vision
treading alone wretchedly
on the thorny pavements of your alienation
leading to your heart
the journey gets tough- -an infinity
during the course of which
the nights are long and tedious
the mornings bring no calm
such nights and mornings together
keep bruising the pain hidden
behind every hearty smile
in such moments of isolation
from the rest of the world,
and my own busy self
the medicinal relief I receive
by writing orphan poems with broken reeds
the feel of such writes is special to me
especially those which are written
with the eyes blurred
hands numb
heart dead
and mind not working at all…
The Medicinal Relief! by Shahzia Batool is a nice poem that speaks about the the orphan and... nice poem thank you sister
Very Fantastic poem indeed Shahzia..This poem carries an in depth meaning..I might have read as many as five time to grasp it. But each time, I came out with different messages.. First of all the poem is written with heart, whose world is far away from the world like orphan, secondly this poem is written by a person one wih eyes blurred, hands numb, heart dead, poor working of mind and these heartfelt poem, do fetch money for self medicinal relief..Really appreciate the way you presented it. Loved reading it..plus 10
Ration of heart that words of heart and medical through journey of heart
by writing orphan poems with broken reeds the feel of such writes is special to me i must say some can talk some can run some can paint and you can write, you are born to do this and you prove that point with each word of your piece....splendid work didi
Deep gloom drips from every word of this verse but it's sweet and touching.
I'm sure your mind is always working Shahzia to write such great poetry.
If you go on writing such good poems and most of us going on reading them, where is the scope for the real orphan poems? Your relief comes not from writing them alone. We are all here to supplement to your other needs and so a poet`s medicinal relief is a bliss of the highest kind.. Excellent rendering and rightly condensed thoughts have made your verse great. Here goes my 10 out of ten and from the midst of relief in mount, you please have one more smile..
ah wat a lovely poem has got created with eyes blurred hands numb heart dead and mind not working at all…: -) a wonderful write
In a spark of some unconscious imagination Or in an intuitively telescoped montage Of my deep vision A wonder start to the poem. Pain the protagonist is felt in my brain. Good display of feelings implied in the verse. Beautiful writing.10/10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The Medicinal Relief! by Shahzia Batool is a nice poem that speaks about the the orphan and... nice poem thank you sister