The Meadows Of My Mind Poem by Heather Burns

The Meadows Of My Mind

Rating: 5.0


As you wander in the meadows
sometimes I see you there

Strolling up a shady lane
gentle breezes in your hair

Then sometimes in the meadows
running to and fro

gathering beautiful flowers
laughing as you go

I asked you in the meadows
stay and we will find

Roses in the meadows
in the meadows of my mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nasarudheen Parameswaran 27 August 2013

S o simple and sweet, meanigful that urges to be with nature. I give 10/10

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Sekharan Pookkat 27 August 2013

so beautiful- gentle breezes in your hair - I like it so much and give you 10/10

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Dee Corpolongo 27 August 2013

This is such an amazing poem, so beautiful is the picture you paint with words. I truly love the feeling so serene, so beautiful left in my mind! Thank you.

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Kelly Zion 27 August 2013

So sweet. I wish I knew who you were calling to the meadows.

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Deepak Sawhney 26 August 2013

Absolutely beautiful. In fact stupendous. Loved the vivid imagination.

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Joseph Anderson 30 August 2013

Meadows of my mind-a serenly beautiful metaphor for the mind.I still wish to know your tutor. A delight to ponder

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Queeny Gona 28 August 2013

Lovely write with beautiful imagery! Roses in the meadows In the meadows if my mind.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Wow...Wonderful poem..Beautiful picture very well captured...loved it.

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Marcus Mckinley 27 August 2013

a beautiful reminiscing thought of someone dearly loved. nicely done

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Dave Walker 27 August 2013

A very beautiful poem, flows wonderfully.

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