Treasure Island

Jameel Ahmed Ansari


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The Lovely Glance


She glanced at me,
I stared at her,
I looked in her eyes,
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  • Michelle Claus (4/15/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    I recall the days of glances and flirtation. I read this poem from the perspective of shyness, and it hits close to home. I enjoyed it, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Parithi Muthurasan (4/16/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    It started so well,
    it ended so sad,
    But one thing she did,
    Was she left me mad! ----very realistic lines..............by parithi (Report) Reply

  • Bella Stylos (1/30/2012 7:56:00 PM)

    Seduction they say is an art, glances are the veins, did u fall for seduction! ? Or did u let it rake you out of your own walls? I like this poem (Report) Reply

  • Luz Hanaii (7/18/2011 6:44:00 PM)

    Impressively good... love your style of writing. I think you're very good. (Report) Reply

  • Sonya Khan (3/7/2011 3:08:00 PM)

    Hey, that was such a sweet poem, I myself have been in a similar situation, and the game playing of the glances happen just like that, love the poem.
    Sonya :) x (Report) Reply

  • Pierre Pabstel (3/5/2011 1:12:00 PM)

    Pretty good. Personally though, I didn't like the ending. Other than that though, good work. (Report) Reply

  • Ivan Cheong (3/3/2011 7:32:00 AM)

    Hey Man,
    I like this poem. HOwever, just my humble opinions, the first few stanzas seem a bit repetitious in terms of the location of the ideas expressed for those stanzas..If there was some variation in ways of expressing that idea, it would have been better.... after all, i like this poem! it's so true and easily related to my life, maybe everybody's lives.

    Best,
    Ivan (Report) Reply

  • majid Alsaady (2/27/2011 10:39:00 AM)

    full of life/this poem shows that u deal with pure emotions well.u r able to portray human feelings well. excellent flow of wordings. alas the game was over in haste
    and end in ordinary encounter, thou the final question left a different impression (Report) Reply

  • Nadine Mushcab (2/24/2011 6:57:00 AM)

    It describes most of how we all feel! ! ..
    It says things that we mostly dont see! !
    and most of all it has true innocent emotion in it! !
    I really liked and im glad i read it, looking forward to read some more =) (Report) Reply

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