The Lost Reverie Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

The Lost Reverie

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Receding night goes grinning whilst still grey,
Loosening grip on her night-long dark belt,
As frosty snow mellows slowly to melt,
As moon saunters to hide behind bright day,
Eastern skies as look laced with limpid red,
Mist behind grey shadows begins to flee,
And dawn rises restful from flurried sea
Like a fair maid musing from bridal bed,
As Arun's1 bright amorous arrows aim
To ruffle facile feathers of the night,
Declaring reign of Sun's radiant light,
Dawn turns to day, her rightful crown to claim.

And robbed of an early dawn's dewy dream,
Trying to recall and somewhat unsure
Of its gossamer rainbow-like vague theme,
I wake, and wonder if dreams can endure.
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Arun1 in Sanskrit is the name of Sun's charioteer that brings in the reign of dawn.
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Musings | 01.02.12 |
Topic: sun, dawn, dream

Wednesday, October 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,dream,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 31 October 2019

Beautiful description of the gradual arrival of dawn! After a sound sleep, when we wake up, we fail to recollect what we have been dreaming. Sometimes we cannot have even a faint memory! The transition of the night into day is beautifully delineated here.

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

Another good poet liking this poem enough to comment on it calling it beautiful. Thank you dear poet, your views always weigh with me.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2019

A wonderful poem that brings out the beauty in nature. Excellent write with superb imagery..

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 October 2019

It feels good you liked it, dear poet of note.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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