The Lost Love Poem by Raihana Abdul Jabbar

The Lost Love

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Cutting into the midnight-blue sky,
Lined with a faded red glow,
He came, with radiance of a thousand rays...
Peeping from, among the craggy green hills,
At his lover, whom he'd left,
With shiny beads of pearls on her cheek...
She woke in her full bloom, amidst
The silent water, sensing his touch,
Inspite of the misty air...
The lovelorn lady lotus,
Shivered at the sun's kiss,
Danced with the light breeze...
Jealousy, Time was, in their happiness,
Dragging the Light into the sea...
The lady waits till the next dawn'
Again to be left alone, as darkness creeps in....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Library @ Debadarshi 04 August 2012

Great..... A good controle over the metaphore, beautiful rhyming, i must read twice....

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 September 2008

lovely composition with fine words! the poem emitting love........10

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