The Little Savita Child....... [childhood; Moon; My Response To Savita Tyagi's Poem 'playful Moon'; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

The Little Savita Child....... [childhood; Moon; My Response To Savita Tyagi's Poem 'playful Moon'; Short]



Many moons ago in a desert landscape,
a little girl, up from Earth, at me did gape.
She had long straight black hair (with one curl) .
I'd watch her ply** the bricks and sometimes twirl.

She smiled at me and my craters would fill....
with warmth from her smiles. That was until...
she grew up as human children are apt to do,
and off to the United States she quickly flew

But, i still see her at times walking on a path,
admiring the flowers and the setting sun.
Yes I'm sometimes watching though the sun hath....
not yet set! She looks like she's still having fun.

(October 10,2015)

Saturday, October 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: childhood ,memories,moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
thanks Savita for the fine poem and your inspiration. :) bri

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** PLY intransitive verb [DEFINITION #2]
1: to apply oneself steadily
2: to go or travel regularly
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 October 2015

This sounds so cute! But this 'Savita child' sometimes grows into a hard core philosopher or even a mystic! I am sure she enjoyed this poem!

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Kelly Kurt 10 October 2015

A fun piece, Bri. Nicely done.

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Savita Tyagi 10 October 2015

No matter where I live the child in me brings the most fun for me. Thanks Bri for such playful response. Loved your poem.

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Bri Edwards 10 October 2015

** PLY intransitive verb [DEFINITION #2] 1 : to apply oneself steadily 2 : to go or travel regularly bri :)

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