The Lifes Cycle Of A Brave Heart Poem by montana hohensee

I yearn to have a life and love like this- of course that will not die!

Hi Montana, I have to laugh because I see that there are those that would change the title here if they could. LOL. But what you have written here fits the title very well. There are spelling errors throughout the poem, but they did not stop from reading this like it was written. Just go through it again, slowly, and check the spelling. I know how these things can happen, cause I write in ahurry, then get a lot of comments that say correct this or that. LOL. Sometimes I have to edit and reedit before I fianlly post something, but I still post whatever with errors, LOL. You have written a very good poetic piece for your friend. This is very heartfelt and soulful, and the imagery of lighting up people's faces with just a (glace? I think this should be 'glance') , is just beautiful. And it doesn't matter how old you are on the calendar, it matters how old you are in your mind. If you have the wisdom of a 20 year old, that is great. Here is Australia movies rated M for mature audiences are for 15 year olds and older. But not all mid-teens are mature, as we both know. But when you can get compliments that you have the mind of a 20 year old, then girlfriend you have actually gained a lot. Thank you for sharing this poem with us, and I will be reading more. Love & hugs, Barbara

Hi Montana! A powerful write poignant and captive! *10*! ! A Life's Cycle, could be a title could fit for a title! Best regards! Friend Thad

Title suggestions: A Life So Loved, from your poem would be my first pick. Next thought might be: Brave Heart Hope you find the satisfying one. It can be a challenge at times. H