The Life....Never Alive. Poem by kafil uddin raihan.

The Life....Never Alive.

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Faulty fertilization,
Mistimed zygote,
Newer embryo,
Unusual pulsation,
Immature beats,
Rough movements,
It's first appearance,
None wants it,
None ready to appreciate,
It is unexpected,
Undesired presence of it,
All deny to bring it to light,
Who is responsible?
Who cares of it?
It will disappear suddenly,
As it appeared there,
It is a hidden life,
No sign of it's living,
It is neither dead,
Nor a living being,
It is a great sin,
An abortion,
A mysterious vanishing magic,
It is the life....never alive on this earth.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amelia Boatwright 17 August 2009

well it was different i didnt like it all that much.

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Frank Lambert 17 August 2009

Hi Kafil, an apt title, a very human act. Why do we do it? Frank

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Joseph Poewhit 17 August 2009

A real holocaust of the unborn living.

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Lynn Glover 17 August 2009

A very interesting approach to abortion, a way to murder an unborn baby. Thanks for the write. Look at my 'I Want to Live'. concerning abortion. Your friend Lynn.

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Surya . 17 August 2009

very interesting poem.unlikely subject yet informative voted10 surya

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Matthew C. L. Pratt 21 August 2009

Very well portrayed and supported

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Marissa Hollis 19 August 2009

wow. i couldn't stop reading this poem. very good. right to the point. enjoyable.

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 19 August 2009

You make your point very assertively and effectively.

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Deborah Cromer 18 August 2009

Wow. This is heavy. The decision to take a life is powerful. Who can know if the life we are not letting live, could be one to show us a way, or to discover a great thing? How does one know WHO they are killing? DC

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Mubeen Sadhika 18 August 2009

The compassion is captured lively. good.

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