The Life Machine Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
The Life Machine
Thoughts:
They reach the mind,
come floating
in the open space
source unaware;
from no where
inputs feed the brain…
Thoughts;
They bring
light on face,
turn the eyes
shine blue brown or bright;
blow air onto
mouth, make words
flow out water like…
Thoughts;
They come
out to act
jetting fire
onto limbs; out puts
these form the base
that decides
humans’ earth bound life…
Remote
wonderful
is this ware
controlled metabolic!
the machine designed
and made by
the Divine Mechanic!
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Pushes to go deep in itself … the Original, philosophical image. Psychological metaphors … Thanks -!
Dear keshavji, You write about thoughts, but imagine: what will happen if reoccurring thoughts come? Then poetry will run away in no time... thoughts like unbridled horses are a treasure to poet. if they are stagnant, u r gone!
thoughts are inputs into a machine you call body...you miss the message in the poem sadly premji!
You take the intangible... and cleverly form for us great actions.... tis a constant body of works... from where-everest it came! ! ! ! aroha
It is obvious you are in love with words. It is a terminal condition that ends...with writing.(smile) Wonderful craft in this poem. Divine Mechanic would be proud.
Marvelous poem on life machine. Yes this 'machine designed and made by Divine Mechanic! ' 10+++
Very much true words..but only this god-made machine has changed the human life most mechanized..also a fact..is it not? ..interesting
Absolutely great is the creation of the Divine Mechanic! A well crafted poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 10:55:57 PM # 1.0.0.1119
simply superb..... what a wonderful representation of God's creation..... loved it...