The Last Scene Poem by lady grace

The Last Scene

Rating: 4.9


who am i?
to stop the call of death
who am i?
to ignore the sound of trumphets...

i can't..that's why
i am nothing, , , yes i am.
i am useless...i'm so useless

i can't stop the call from heaven
HE is more powerful than me
HE owns our lives
fate and destiny...

look at my eyes dear
you said my eyes gives you life
please don't go..i am helping to fight for this struggle
please try to understand what my lip says...

do you hear me? don't stop looking at me
so you can understand what i'm saying
do you still remember the words i hate?
i don't want you to say goodbye..not even goodnight..

do you feel my trembling hands dear
feel the strength that i'm giving you
do you see that crying little child at the corner?
do you think we can manage if your'e not here?

but...you're journey here perhaps is too short
tho i don't want you to go
tho i want you to stay here
but i can't..i can't really do...

honey please...don't close your eyes
i will do all my best to pull you from this call of death
let me whisper this words for you...
i love you..i love you...please don't go...i love you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 29 June 2009

Much emotion in the words.

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Carol Gall 29 June 2009

such sadness but your writing is amazing you convey all the emotions 10

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Surya . 29 June 2009

a loved ones cry to save their beloved. how touching. nice write voted10 surya

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Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

loaded with anguish and helplessness a cry for help anfd understanding... the stuff of care and compassion well written cheers

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Sandra Martyres 29 June 2009

A very emotional outburst of helplessness...good write

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 July 2009

oh my, this is so lovely, and so fitting, my friends life support was switched off yesterday and died a couple of hours later, so fitting so beautiful and now im crying! ! !

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 July 2009

astonishing poem! penned beautifully! ....10+

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Ken E Hall 01 July 2009

Painful fo me to read as I have been down that road with life support involved, however the poem is truthful to the facts of life and its sororws...written with compassion...+++10 regards

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Lynda Robson 30 June 2009

A beautifully written poem showing how death is something we cannot avoid and your faith in God shines through, 10 Lynda xx

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Colin J... 29 June 2009

Very moving poem... None of us can control Death... Colin J...

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