~the Last Rung On Your Ladder Poem by Adeline Foster
~the Last Rung On Your Ladder
~ The Last Rung On Your Ladder
Well-up my tears in a bottle;
Fling them into the sea;
You didn’t hear my heart cry; you were looking too high.
The last rung on your ladder was me.
I was the last rung on your ladder,
Taken for granted too long.
Now, as you come down, watch that step at the ground;
The last rung on your ladder is gone.
I was sure of your love at the outset,
Sure that the future was fine;
But I woke up to find you had left me behind,
Down here at the end of the line.
I was the last rung on your ladder,
Taken for granted too long.
Now, as you come down, watch that step at the ground;
The last rung on your ladder is gone.
I was there when you needed my loving;
I only asked some of your time;
But my needs had to wait until now it’s too late.
The last rung on your ladder was mine.
I was the last rung on your ladder,
Taken for granted too long.
Now, as you come down, watch that step at the ground;
The last rung on your ladder is gone.
How often we fail to see what's right before our eyes, and we miss the simple gifts that hold the answers to our dreams. But they will not wait forever to be discovered, and how sad to finally realize what we've lost. A very truthful tale, beautifully written. Nice flow and lilting rhythm throughout. Linda :)
I think this would be wonderful, set to music. You have written this very well and the theme is all to familiar to so many of us. Nice work. Raynette
An established fact......what goes up...............must..............come down!
There is a beautiful cadence and expression in this poem. It was an enjoyable read.
Wow! ! ! ! This is so powerful... thank you for recommending it to me. Unfortunately, it doesn't remind me of my current situation but rather my ex: /
So sad. Another stunning poem. I will be reading more of your work.
Brilliantly woven, Poetic yet lyrical at the same time. very splendid! !
I love this poem, rings very true. I read quite a few of your poems and I'm honored to have received so many wonderful comments from such a talented writer. Keep it up and I'll keep mine up: -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 6:17:14 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Your repetative emphasis onlast rung on your ladder just jells it. Sad, but Iliked it Another 10